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RiverClan / Re: singing in the rain, just singing in the rain [open to all]
« on: December 02, 2012, 09:18:07 am »
"Fine." He meowed to the medicene cat apprentice. He tried to take notice that she had just asked him if something was wrong. He even tried not to use a monotone and like he was actually trying to be nice. Then he heard the voice in the back of his head don't make friends. He just didn't want all his friends to ditch him like his family, and his chidhood friends. It seemed like everyone would leave him, and he was too afraid to try and make friends.

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The Help Desk / Really Random Question.
« on: December 02, 2012, 08:41:15 am »
Okay, so this is kind of a random question, but I was thinking about creating a forum for something else. So, I just wanted to know is this was free. Is it?

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ThunderClan / Re: Sweet Dreams Are Made of These [P]
« on: November 28, 2012, 04:02:41 pm »
"But if you want me to go, I really will. I promise." He meowed suddenly feeling a bit bad about lying, especially to another medicene cat apprentice. He liked something about Firstpaw somewhere deep down inside him. He thought that she was kinda friendly, so he turned and sarted making his way back to the windlcan border.

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FanClans and Tribes / Re: RaptorClan, Clan of the Swift, Smart, and Strong - - -
« on: November 25, 2012, 11:47:33 am »

W.I.P


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ThunderClan / Re: Sweet Dreams Are Made of These [P]
« on: November 25, 2012, 11:38:31 am »
"Yep."He meowed, and then he thought about how she would know who he was. Of course, she was thunderclan's medicene cat apprentice. "Aren't you thunderclan's medicene cat apprentice? He questioned her raising imaginary eyebrows. The orange tabby shuddered slightly watching her claws, and he really hoped that it would not come to fighting. So he unsheathed his claws, from his large orange paws. He flicked his long orange striped tail back and forth impatiently, and gave her a look as if to say right back at you.

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RiverClan / Re: singing in the rain, just singing in the rain [open to all]
« on: November 25, 2012, 11:34:10 am »
Was she ever going to leave him alone? He thought to himself. He actually kind of envied her cheerfullness, and sometimes he thought of forgetting about his past. But then he always had the thought of what if it happened again, what if he made friends and they all left him. He looked up at the cat, realising that he probably sounded negative. "And how are you?"He asked her. 

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ThunderClan / Re: Sweet Dreams Are Made of These [P]
« on: November 24, 2012, 02:58:00 pm »
"Because you wouldn't want to get me in trouble."He meowed. Then he wished he could take it back, that was a stupid reason. So he had to go to Plan B "No..um...wait...there is an apprentice named...umm...their name is escapes me right now. The have..um..greencough and I really need catnip. So obviously he sucked at lying. He just couldn't do it. End of story. He just hoped it would work, even though he knew it probably wouldn't. He just couldn't get in trouble, not again.

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RiverClan / Re: singing in the rain, just singing in the rain [open to all]
« on: November 24, 2012, 02:52:54 pm »
"Fine." He meowed in a monotone, not that he ever spoke without one. He never used any expression or showed any emotion. It was like he was just there, almost like he hated everything. He didn't want to make friends, too afraid they would leave, and he didn't want to do any training. He yawned ad put his head on his paws staring blankly at the rain outside. 

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RiverClan / Re: singing in the rain, just singing in the rain [open to all]
« on: November 20, 2012, 06:28:29 am »
Hourpaw had noticed the downpour, and he completly hated the sound it made hitting the apprentices den. Everytime another rain drop hit the top, he closed his eyes. Then he noticed something or someone outside, and as he looked a little closer he realised that it was a cat. It was the medicene cat apprentice for that matter, and he was astonsished that she was bouncing around in the rain. The rain gave him too many bad memories, it was raining the day his parents abandon him. Now Hourpaw was too afraid to make friends, because he thought they would abandon his too. The stuck his head out into the rain, willing to try it. The first rain drop that hit his head made him shrink back into the den. He sat back down in the comfort of his nest and watched the cat outside.

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RiverClan / Re: The Great Rain
« on: November 19, 2012, 08:59:47 pm »
"Congratualations Mosaicstar, and Congratualtions Rainkissed. "Hourpaw meowed smiling at the new knew high positions that where named. Althought his smile quickly faded when he saw the body of Wavestar. The leader would never be coming back, but Hourpaw knew that Mosaicstar would be a great leader and start a whole new era. Although first the leader would have to go to moonstone/pool. Hourpaw had actually never traveled that far, and he wondered what it looked like. The riverclan apprentice was happy for the new leader and deputy.

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RiverClan / Re: Riverclan List of Current Members
« on: November 19, 2012, 08:52:47 pm »
Hourpaw is an apprentice^^

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ThunderClan / Re: Sweet Dreams Are Made of These [P]
« on: November 19, 2012, 08:44:46 pm »
"Hi."Bouelvardpaw meowed to the she-cat. He could almost tell what she was thinking, not because he was smart but because almost any cat would be thinking this right now. intruder Boulevardpaw knew that he was but he couldn't get in trouble not again. He could just hope and pray that she wouldn't call out, or could he do something else? So he smiled that cat and meowed "I really do hope I'm not causing too much harm, by wandering this far." He meowed it like an angel, and then added a wink of his left eye when he had finished. Boulevard just hoped that she wouldn't say anything.

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Character Archives / Re: {{Time Would Have Been So Much More [Done!]
« on: November 18, 2012, 04:47:57 pm »
Thanks!

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ThunderClan / Re: Sweet Dreams Are Made of These [P]
« on: November 18, 2012, 08:35:42 am »
Boulevardpaw heard something behind him. It sounded like something had tripped. He just asumed that if something had tripped, it wasn't a cat because no one was that clumsy. The windclan mca was too scared to look behind him, he just did't know what to expect. A baby fox, or young puppy? Something in his mind told him to run, and another part of him was begging him to turn and look. His small orange paws started to pivot, and he started turning very slowly. He had his eyes closed, still unsure of what would be there. He opened one small amber orb, just peeking out. Then he opened both eyes, and he saw a cat?! So this apprentice looking cat had tripped and fallen. Actually this particular apprentice sized-kitty had looked familiar. He knew that he had seen her somewhere, but where?

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Character Archives / {{Time Would Have Been So Much More [Done!]
« on: November 17, 2012, 05:00:27 pm »





Name:
Hourkit-->Hourpaw-->Hourglass

Gender:
Male

Alliance:
Riverclan

Rank:
Apprentice

Appearance (at least four sentences):
Hourpaw is a black and white shorthair. He is actually almost solid white, except for the few small black spots scattered around his body. His paws are black, making him look like he is wearing boots. His long white tail has a black spot on the tip of his tail. There are about three medium sized black spots in his back. On his face there is only black spot that covers his left ear and goes to the tip of his eye. The rest of his face is only white. Hourpaw's eyes are a light green color, with a hint of light blue. They actually change color. In the summer they are light green, and then as it gets colder they become more blue. He has a small pink nose, that actually can't smell very well. He has trouble smelling, and its very hard for him to track things while hunting. Hourpaw isn't a very large cat, he isn't small but he isn't large. Actually he's right around the average size. althouh, he has very small paws, this makes his claws also very unsharp and small. His teeth are large and white. Hourpaw isn't the largest or the strongest, but he's handsome in his own way.

Personality (at least four sentences):
Hourpaw doesn't care about anything or anyone. I mean he wants to care, but he doesn't allow himself to. He doesn't care about his training, or his apprentice duties. He just doesn't try at them, he knows he could do it, but he doesnt try. He just doesn't try, at them, for example if he  was supposed to cat a rabbit instead of leaping, he would lazily walk out of the bush. He wouldn't chase it after either, he'd shrug and then walk away. He wouldn't care or be bothered by his mentor's dissapointment, this makes him one of the worst hunter's and fighters. He also doesn't care about any one else, he cares about his clan, but he promised himself that he would never make any friends, or like anyone more than a friend. The reason he is like this is because his parents and realtives all left him. He is just so afraid that anyone will just leave him. He also doesn't care about being an apprentice, because he is in a kind of deppression. This depression makes him not care about anything or anyone.

Hourpaw isn't the friendliest cat, he just wants others to leave him alone so he normally just makes sarcastic remarks. Hourpaw's sarcasm isn't meant to be funny, its meant to keep others away from him. Either he'll say something sarcastic or he will say something mean. He doesn't mean to hurt anyone else's feelings or be mean, but sometimes his deppression will just take over. He just sometimes wants to be a loner, some think that he is mildly bipolar, which could be true. Sometimes he can be nice, and then he will be come very mean.   Hourpaw needs someone who will teach him how to love, and that he shouldn't live in the past.
 
History (at least six sentences):
Hourpaw, then just Hour, was born a loner. He was born in a nice den, with the most caring parents, or so he thought. Hour wasn't as large as his siblings, but his parents still treated him the same. He played for hours with his siblings and parents. He grew up with them, happy as a clam, until he was about 4 moons old. It was early morning, when he woke up. He called for his parents and siblings, they weren't here. Maybe they just went hunting, he assumed. He waited for them, sitting pateintly in the same spot all day. When they didn't come back he was devastated. So he went out on his own.

Then he met another younger kitten, her name was Minute. Hour and Minute instantly became friends, they thought that they were supposed to be with eachother because of their similiar names. They hunted together, and made a den together. He lived together with Minute for about 1 moon, until he woke up and she was gone, just like his parents. He was so upset that he ran through the woods. While he was running he heard a voice, it was Minute's! He instantly tried to creep up to her, but there was another cat with her. A large black tom, and they were talking about running away together. Hour even heard Minute call him a 'weakling.' Hour turned and ran, he ran so far that he ended up in Thunderclan territory, where he now lives.

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